W.A.L.T upload something from last week or Mrs Hall's art.
Last week I wrote a description about my step dad Matt. In my writing I wrote about what he looks like, his hobbies and his personality.
1: What did you enjoyed: What I enjoyed was writing my descriptive writing.
2: What did you do well: What I did well was writing my publishing my writing.
3: What could you improve on: What I improve on is and in more descriptive words.
Have you done a descriptive writing?
Kia ora Dany. I am Kylah from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your writing.
I learnt that Matt is tall.
Maybe you could be cybersmart and leave out your address.
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Mā te wā
Kylah