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Friday, 26 June 2020

The Muddy Paddock


 W.A.L.T about recount writing.

At my place I was on my bike with my step dad and we were doing skids in a paddock with the dogs. We had to write a level three recount writing about what we did at home. 

Reflection
1. What did you enjoy? I enjoyed writing about my recount. 

2. What could I improve on? I can improve on making better writing.    

 What type do you think my quad bike is?   

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Danny. I am Kylah from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked your story.
    I learnt that it looked like a field of mud.
    What is a quad bike?
    Please visit my blog
    here
    Mā te wā
    Kylah

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  2. Kia ora Danny,
    I am Joan from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked your story
    I learnt that there is such thing as quad bikes for kids
    I live on a farm to, so I can relate to paddocks turning into fields in mud!
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Joan

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