Today for reading we read a story called Cancel The Invasion. It is about 3 kids one girl and 2 boys. They we're playing cricket in the park until the ball hit on a guys head. The kids thought he looked like a alien and he thought they were different people. He thought she was a vampire and he thought one of the boys was a wizard and he thought the other boy was a warrior so then he sat under a tree on a bench and he saw a wizard who turned into a hawk.
hey danny
ReplyDeletei like your post today its cool and interesting why did you chose to do it on a storyboard? this is a reel cool post keep up the good work theirs only one thing your spelling did you try do spell hawk or howk anyways good post.
Hi Danny,
ReplyDeleteWow you did a really good job on this storyboard! Was this a story you were reading in class? Maybe next time you could add more pictures in the storyboard rather than just writing but apart from that this was great! Do you like making storyboards or do you prefer to just write a summary?
Hi Danny.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your post today, well done. It is a bit blurry, so I can't see the words on the storyboard, but well done you did a good job, how long have you been using storyboard. I like your explanation you explained it well, just a few things, like the punctuation, but overall it is good. I think I remember that story, I read it a few years ago.
hey Danny, i don't really get how the girl is able to teleport but yeah the reason i say that is because she was like 10 meters away from the pitcher(the guy that throws the ball) and the ball was the in front of the boy but than the ball is in front of the boy and the girl was saying sorry.also what was the ending with the guy that says "i love the earth" sorry if i read it wrong.But i did really get the story. So wore the kids aliens,vampires and wizards.Who was the old man?
ReplyDeleteHi Danny, I am Noah from Waikowhai Primary School In Auckland NZ. I really enjoyed reading your blog,the story is very interesting. But why did the man think the kids were warriors or a vampire? Maybe next time you could add more writing and detail but anyways your blog was very very awesome! You could check my blog here it is https://wpsnoahn.blogspot.com/ Bye have a great DAY!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Danny. I am Kylah from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story.
I learnt that they thought the man looked like an alien.
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