Hi Danny I like your post, I enjoyed reading it, I can't really remember where you live, but I think you live on a farm. I liked how you told a story about your sheep, are they pets? When did you get your sheep?
Hey Danny, I like how you mentioned the details such as, how many sheep you have, what they are, and if they have lambs. Next time you could add in your punctuation but otherwise this is a great blog post. What one is your favourite?
Hi Danny i like your free writing i like your little story about your sheep. would you want more sheep or different other animals? i think you should of talk about something else to just so its more cool and interesting.
Hi Danny I like your post, I enjoyed reading it, I can't really remember where you live, but I think you live on a farm. I liked how you told a story about your sheep, are they pets? When did you get your sheep?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Danny. I am Kylah from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story.
I learnt that you have sheep.
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Mā te wā
Kylah
Hey Danny,
ReplyDeleteI like how you mentioned the details such as, how many sheep you have, what they are, and if they have lambs. Next time you could add in your punctuation but otherwise this is a great blog post. What one is your favourite?
Hi Danny
ReplyDeletei like your free writing i like your little story about your sheep. would you want more sheep or different other animals? i think you should of talk about something else to just so its more cool and interesting.
funny story
ReplyDeletehi danny at my house we have 4 dog,s and 4 cat,s and we live on a beach. maybe you could tell me your dogs name too
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